Dorothy-Mama & daddy can i go swimming in the water pleases?
Mother&Father-Yes stay near the shor ok.
Dorothy-Ok!
Something whant wrong.
It is Short but i am still working on it
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a newer stroiy i am working on
Started by Sailormoon456, Jun 24 2008 04:44 PM
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Posted 24 June 2008 - 04:44 PM
It began 10 years ago when a mother and father plus their 4 year old doughter.But they whant to the beach with their baulteir but this timie something whent wrong.
Dorothy-Mama & daddy can i go swimming in the water pleases?
Mother&Father-Yes stay near the shor ok.
Dorothy-Ok!
Something whant wrong.
It is Short but i am still working on it
Dorothy-Mama & daddy can i go swimming in the water pleases?
Mother&Father-Yes stay near the shor ok.
Dorothy-Ok!
Something whant wrong.
It is Short but i am still working on it
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Posted 24 June 2008 - 05:57 PM
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Honestly, check your spelling to at least a readable level beforehand, instead of making it read like a script, make it read like a book.
so far, I can't say much of the storyline.
Honestly, check your spelling to at least a readable level beforehand, instead of making it read like a script, make it read like a book.
so far, I can't say much of the storyline.
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Posted 24 June 2008 - 07:16 PM
Hello again,
I just wanted to remind you that CDRudd has asked you to stop posting stories in this part of the boards. This subforum is for discussion of SailorSun.org, the online comic. Please find other places to post your stories. Thanks!
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I just wanted to remind you that CDRudd has asked you to stop posting stories in this part of the boards. This subforum is for discussion of SailorSun.org, the online comic. Please find other places to post your stories. Thanks!
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Posted 27 June 2008 - 10:29 AM
Thom has been kind enough to add a subforum for Fan Fictions Sailormoon456. You can post your fics there.
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