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Don Edwards

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  1. Story Friday April 15, 2016

    If Sirleck is considering Elliot, or anyone known to be a close friend of Elliot, as a possible next host, he's a complete idiot. There are several fairly-high-power magic users in there - just among the human teenagers, and Sirleck should be aware of a minimum of one and possibly four or more. At least two of Elliot's friends have family connections - one of them extremely obvious - to DGB and full-blown wizards, There are three Immortals involved that we know Sirleck is aware of. That's a firing squad already assembling itself; stepping in front of it and yelling FIRE! would be Darwin-Award-worthy. So what does Sirleck want with Elliot? To get rid of Magus.
  2. EGS Strip Slaying

    Well, there would be a serious problem with the size difference.
  3. Story: Wednesday, April 13, 2016

    Also, just because the Colonel is aware that Pandora has been manipulating Elliot, doesn't mean that this fact has anything to do with why he planned to get Elliot killed. Personally I think that their use of the hammers thing for the aberration hunt was pretty clever and quite justified. It's their shoving the jobs onto a couple of barely-teenage kids (or at least leaving the kids thinking it was up to them) that's a problem. They could have done everything they did with Nanase and Susan, and said "But all this is so you can defend yourself in case the monster gets to you again first, before the proper authorities - whom we're about to go notify - get to the monster. They are better equipped, better trained, more experienced in magic, and PAID, to handle things like this. If possible, stay out of it." I would have had no problem with that.
  4. Story: Wednesday, April 6, 2016

    I disagree. Duck is MORE likely than Noah is to be Noriko's child. (But it's still a very low probability. The only way Noah makes sense is if someone got a sample of Noriko's DNA and put it into a Uryuom egg without her knowledge or consent - and that works exactly as well for Duck. Other options, Duck at least has a more plausible age difference as compared to Tedd, but still, why is Duck in Moperville rather than with Noriko?)
  5. Things You Only Noticed On Reread

    And there is a theory that Greg is dating Vladia. There's no evidence either for or against this theory.
  6. Story: Friday April 8, 2016

    Actually I see several circles in some degree of contact with one another - ranging from "aware that there's another bunch that can be contacted through this person" to "have several members in common". They are separate circles because within each one everyone knows a good bit about everyone else's magic, but for each pair of them - in at least one direction - there's a substantial body of important information common to all the members of one circle that isn't similarly shared in the other circle. In approximate order of first appearance the circles I see are: DGB the dojo: Greg, Elliot, Justin, Nanase, Grace, and Ellen the Main 8 Raven and Noah Luke and at least three friends Charlotte's Angels Ashley and Elliot Luke's group is the most isolated. The only thing we've been shown they know about any other group is that Justin is part of a group - possibly along with Grace and/or Tedd - that is fairly knowledgeable but doesn't know everything. The only thing we've been shown that anybody else knows about them is that Luke is in a group of at least four people who are trying to figure out what the heck is going on. On the other extreme, Charlotte's Angels and Ashley/Elliot each have 50% overlap with the Main 8. And the head of the dojo is the only member of that circle who is not part of the Main 8. Now as for Mr.V's request to keep the size of the group down to 8. I assert that - so far - this has been done. The closest they've come to an exception is not Ashley, but Charlotte and Diane - those two know a fair amount about Ellen's, Elliot's, and Nanase's magic, where Ashley doesn't know much about Nanase's or anything about Ellen's. C&D have Mr.V's phone number; Ashley doesn't know of his existence. (On the other hand, Charlotte and Diane were previously aware of magic; Ashley was not.) But none of those three know anything about Susan's magic, or Tedd's, or Grace's, or Justin's. It would not make a lot of sense, at this time, to bring any of them completely into the circle.
  7. Story: Wednesday, April 6, 2016

    If it's white-on-white text, click the "Source" button and you'll get to see and edit your text. (And actually you CAN edit it without seeing it, or you can highlight sections of the white-on-white to make them readable for a moment... but it's vastly easier to edit if you can actually see all that's going on.) If it's something else, you'll have to tell us what.
  8. NP: Friday, April 8, 2016

    A decently well-made gun in good condition being competently handled, the chance of that happening is negligible. Something, you know, about not having a finger on the trigger - and with some guns, where the safety is easily reached, having the safety on - unless you positively intend to fire the gun in the next couple seconds.
  9. Dream a little dream.

    I once had a dream where, as it ended, I thought "this is a really weird dream". And that's the ONLY thing I can remember about it.
  10. Things that make you worried.

    I once sent something to my mother-in-law that would take a signature on delivery. They claimed to have attempted to deliver it at a certain time and found nobody home to sign for it. If they had attempted to deliver it at that time, they would have literally stepped over her before getting to the door - she was working in the garden next to the front door. And her housemate was also home. This was on the fifth day after I paid for next-day delivery.
  11. Story: Monday, April 11, 2016

    I discount the importance of Diane dismissing the idea of a resemblance. It seems to me that quite a lot of teenagers who aren't aware they have an identical twin would have that reaction even upon meeting that twin. Particularly relatively egotistical ones like Diane. "NOBODY's quite like me!" For reference I suggest either version of the movie The Parent Trap. (Link is to the 1961 version which I think was better.)
  12. Story: Friday, April 1st 2016

    So could Ellen, but she'd probably choose not to use that label.
  13. Is EGS:NP becoming too important?

    If there's a page every MWF, then one month is at least 12 pages (most Februaries), usually 13 pages (most other months, plus a February about once every ten years on average - leap years where February begins on a comic-release day), and, twice a year on average, 14 pages (a 31-day month beginning on Monday or Wednesday). It doesn't take much to make 13 pages take more than a month.
  14. Story: Wednesday, April 6, 2016

    Well, we know she's been active outside the USA. Which is confirmed here.
  15. NP: Friday, April 8, 2016

    In an old computer game I've been playing lately, there's this dragon who says that there's only one creature in the world that can threaten it, and wants me to go kill that creature. If the creature can threaten the dragon, and I can kill the creature, am I not theoretically able to threaten the dragon? (In the game, in fact, I am not - there are creatures I am incapable of attacking, period, and there are other creatures that will attack me. This particular dragon is in the former category. So far I've found only one creature in both categories, and none that are in neither.)
  16. Is EGS:NP becoming too important?

    Sabrina Online this month (April 2016, the first part of this archive page, for anyone coming in late) is a particularly good example of how bigger (but less frequent) releases help with multi-threading. The comic does four newspaper-comic-style strips a month... all released at the same time. This month the first two strips are one scene, the third is in an entirely different thread, and the fourth is a some-hours-later aftermath of the first two. I don't think it would have worked nearly as well if there were one strip a week. This isn't saying that I think EGS or NP should be published in a similar fashion. Doing so would have consequences, and they may not be to Dan's liking (or, less importantly, ours). Just that different manners of publication, even seemingly-mild differences, change constraints on what works and what doesn't.
  17. Is EGS:NP becoming too important?

    It is possible for a single story to have multiple loosely-related strands going simultaneously, spending a bit of time with one then switching to the other then .... And other than at the climax of the story, there's no need to tie a bunch of strands up at the same time. You can have strand B start in the middle of strand A, continue in parallel to strands C and D, and tie back in 2/3 of the way through strand E. However, that's easier to do effectively - i.e. you can get away with more of it - when a single instance of publication has rather more content than a webcomic page, such as in a short story, a comic-book, or even when publishing a novel by chapters. Heck, even TV - I remember the 1960s-era Batman TV shows occasionally would have a narrator voice say "Meanwhile..." and the show would switch to showing what a different group of characters were doing in a different location at the same time that the stuff we just saw was happening. Also it helps to be better at editing out the fluff than Dan is (or I am).
  18. Story: Wednesday, April 6, 2016

    No, that page and the previous would require no changes if Damien both parents, or only one. (and the next page - ??? ) His post-Swedekea conversation with Elliot says that both are dead, but nothing that indicates when or how either of them died. On another note, don't forget that Noriko stayed with Edward and Tedd long enough that Tedd has some memory of being a great disappointment to her. That says to me he was probably at least three or four years old when she left. I seriously don't see Edward telling his preschool son "your mother left because you are such a disappointment".
  19. Story: Wednesday, April 6, 2016

    We have it from Not-Tengu that Noriko looks very much like Nanase. While I wouldn't consider him a reliable source in general, I think on this I'll take his word. Noah looks essentially nothing like Nanase, beyond the basics of being (able to pass as) human. Noah believes his parents are dead. (I thought I recalled some reference to Noah implying that Damien had killed both his parents, but I couldn't find it again.) Noah being a child Noriko made via Uryuom-egg in hopes of a proper apprentice after her disappointment with Tedd doesn't fit in several regards. The most obvious is that they aren't together and Noah is Adrian's apprentice. Also, such a scenario would make Noah rather younger than Tedd, but he and Grace have at least one class together - a class that is usually age-segregated (well, year-of-school-segregated) which means he's essentially the same age as Tedd. I favor the possibility that Tedd's brother (a) is at least a couple years younger and (b) lives elsewhere, probably in Europe - considering that we know Noriko has been monster-hunting there.
  20. NP, Monday April 4, 2016

    I hadn't heard about "stale", but there was the little problem that any water not from wells - and water from some wells - was contaminated with whatever sort of bacteria the folks upstream were currently suffering from. And the denser the population, the more of an issue this was. Population was, of course, densest in cities. Yes, they regarded water as unhealthy to drink, for the very simple reason that people who drank it tended to get sick (not including drunk or hung-over) more than people who didn't. So they drank wine and beer instead. And they also mixed wine/beer (and later rum and other distilled spirits) with water, to reduce the intoxication (and stretch the expensive stuff), but if it had enough alcohol to kill the bacteria they didn't know was in the water... In China they had the same problem; rather than fixating on alcohol, they drank tea. To make good tea you have to boil the water. Which kills the bacteria they didn't know was in the water. So China invented the tea ceremony, and Europe invented the "Hold my beer and watch this!" ceremony.
  21. Story: 2016, April 4th (Monday)

    Unlimited data plans are hard to find. ("Unlimited" with restrictions - like your first gig or so is at best available speed and anything after that is at 2G speed, i.e. nearly useless - are somewhat easier.) When they were easier to find, they had a restriction that you couldn't use the phone device as a wifi hotspot - in other words you could stream a movie on your phone but you couldn't use the phone as your internet connection to stream a movie to your PC. Or, as I put it to my daughter, unlimited data plans are deliberately designed to be useless to most people who'll use a lot of data. Unlimited text and talk plans with reasonable data allowances are not hard to find. Of course, when they say "text" they mean TEXT. Sending a photo via a text message uses some of your data allowance.
  22. NP, Monday April 4, 2016

    Several of the common recreational illegal drugs are known to be less dangerous than alcohol. Just as one example, it's not hard to consume a lethal dose of whiskey, difficult to consume a lethal dose of beer, and very close to impossible to consume a lethal dose of marijuana. Of course, ALL of them are dangerous if done to great excess, or to more moderate excess quite frequently, or even to mild excess if one then proceeds to act on the assumption that one's judgment is not altered or impaired. And anything addictive, even if it's only psychologically addictive, can become a debilitating impediment to life.
  23. This was more than 15 year ago, and I don't remember all the details (and may get a few wrong)... My daughter had a habit of building theme decks that were a lot of fun to play but didn't win a lot. More literary than powerful. She was challenged, by one of the local Magic gurus who was a friend of ours, to build a high-power deck. She built a hand-destruction deck. She got to play first, played a swamp and a Dark Ritual for some BB creature with Flying and the attribute that when it damages a player the player has to discard two cards. The spare mana point went to a spell that forced the guru to discard two cards. The guru played a land and a non-flying creature. Her second turn, she played a second swamp, another one of that spell, and attacked with her creature, so the guru had to discard four cards - emptying his hand. He was never again able to hold a card in his hand from one turn to the next.
  24. Story: 2016, April 4th (Monday)

    We don't know that. We do know that, outside of the superhero spell, he can do morphs that change the AMOUNT of clothing he's wearing. Apparently he went from sweatpants and t-shirt to just a nightie (and presumably underpants in each case). So presumably the extra garment became part of him. What if he'd had something in his pockets? Well, he didn't. As far as I can recall, his pocket contents have only been mentioned in the context of his superhero-spell forms.
  25. Story: 2016, April 4th (Monday)

    I'd bet against his being able to drive with the car keys absorbed into his body. The ignition switch in his car has a mechanical component - you have to physically move things around, and the shape of the key sets cams to the point where that's possible. Most smartphones are purely electronic devices. The few physical switches are momentary-contact things that don't DO something, they just ASK THE SOFTWARE to do something. (Which is why each of them can do several different things depending on context - the software has to decide what that button-push means right now.) In most cases there are other ways to ask the software to do the same thing - the most common exception being "turn on". I'm kind of curious what sort of battery life Elliot gets in this condition... Also, here's another reason he needs to develop a masculinized-female form that looks exactly like him. Get up in the morning, put on a garment that can hold his phone, put phone in garment, transform into the masculinized-female form naked, get dressed, go do something where he's rewarded for knowledge rather than judgment or planning (such as a TV quiz show)...